Oxygen should really have been a two part story.
Now, you have to understand that some care should be given when making that statement. But then again the same thing has probably been said by people about every single episode of Doctor Who. This logic cuts both way, a bad episode could be improved by a second episode but then a good episode would become a bad story if another episode was added. But Oxygen is a story which could have ended with the Doctor saying he was blind and the second episode continuing their escape from Chasm Forge.
But this review isn't about rewriting Oxygen, so lets look at this story in this way, it gets better with a re-watch. And that isn't something unusual in the world of Doctor Who. This episode more than deserves a second watch, just to see how much Jamie Mathieson actually crammed in.

Like the examples stated above, Oxygen is best when it is straightforward and often verging on over the top. The Doctor's line about fighting algorithms was brilliant as was the following comment about fighting the suits, but there are other smaller critiques threaded throughout the episode which don't quite register as part of the larger message. Now some people might appreciate this but I can understand the aversion to preaching. But then if you are going to write an episode of something exploring the evils of capitalism then there is no point of underplaying your hand.
But Oxygen is dense to the point of being overstuffed. The guest characters are just sketches in terms of the episode's overall arc. Abby goes from believing in her bosses and distrusting the Doctor to her giving him approval to open the doors to their suits so he can take revenge on their systems. Ivan loses his love Ellie before the opening credits roll only to act to like a completely different person at the end when her dead body gives him her oxygen canister. The only purpose of Dahh-Ren is to set up some comedic moments between himself and Bill's unmeant space racism. And then the episode only has the time to get in a few funny moments before having to move on. And then there are few side notes on the future of capitalism, Tasker's mention of some long lost union is a fun little nod to how labour will one day fall into the realms of mysticism. But again, the episode doesn't do anything with it despite mentioning it in passing.

During the first fifteen minutes to half hour, Oxygen is more sure of itself, with its pacing kept nice and tight. The Doctor, Bill and Nardole's exploration of the deserted space-station mirrors that of The Fourth Doctor, Sarah Jane and Harry's in The Ark in Space, something which is always good to recall. To my surprise, Nardole's inclusion on this particular mission leads to some interesting new avenues being explored. He is the rare companion who will join the Doctor here and there with only Captain Jack and River Song rivalling him.
Nardole's early efforts in this story are about trying to get everyone back to the TARDIS as soon as possible, which does have the opposite effect and the Doctor digs his heels in, staying where he is, well, that and the distress call that the Doctor had received. Unlike Bill or any other companion we have ever seen, Nardole's interest is not really in exploration or not even getting people to safety, just getting himself back to the TARDIS. Here again, this episode should have taken the time to explore why Nardole is so obsessed with protecting the mysterious vault and take more time to explore his motivations in the middle of the episode, where he appears to just be along for the ride as well as being the one to deliver wisecracks and exposition, which makes his sudden shouting-fest at the Doctor at the end of the episode all the more shocking and surprising. And while the final scene is compelling in its own way, thanks to the writing, direction and some good acting but it only serves to empathise the abrupt shift in tone. But the moment does still feel in keeping with the rest of the slightly rushed episode.

And the zombies - I know that wasn't what they were but what I'm going to call them, not least because Pearl Mackie seems to do a good job of acting like a George Romero extra - also detract from the second point of this episode, that space is a lot more dangerous than we actually believe. And this point is at its most effective when the characters suffer from lack of oxygen or pressure. The zombies just serve to push the action back into the realm of Doctor Who, giving the audience something visual to be terrified of. And this does nothing but undercut Mathieson's writing and Palmer's direction when it comes to trying to make space something to be terrified of.
I'm sure you've guessed that I found plenty to critique in Oxygen but that is a perfectly good sign, meaning there was plenty there to talk about anyway. Like most of the other episodes so far in this particular series, the episode is densely packed with great ideas but it is hard to tell how much more screen-time it would have need to develop a more of those ideas to a satisfactory place. However the actual forty-five minutes of this episode makes the best of what it can include and while the final effect doesn't come across as nimble as Thin Ice, Oxygen sure as hell has a lot to offer...
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